a spade, and some plant matter.
i made lots of marks.
meanwhile: some thumbnails.
separate but equal process.
but now to combine!
analog collage
piece by piece into motifs,
cutting and pasting.
need to cradle sprout.
turn the spade mark 180?
now gently holding.
final vector marks,
and bernhard modern typeface:
the ending product.
You've got all the right "parts" here to display the evolution of the motif. And I appreciate that you attempted to "design" it more (with the almost diagrammatic and linear progression of those circles).
ReplyDeleteHowever, here's a few pointers to produce a more clear "information graphic" of process.
• The size is too small to be legible.
• The framing is a bit cramped.
• The labeling is clear but the placement is in the way.
• The labels also lack visual consistency.